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The night

tonight is bright

with the full moon

hanging low

showing the face

of the partially naked

... earth

to the skinless universe.

 

by Mister Poet

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Aleksandra

Today I got letter from our friend John. He greets you again all of you. And he says that he miss us a lot. I am sharing with you his poetry, he wants to share it.

 

From the poems what I got, I can see his changed style of writing. And I love it.

And I am so glad and happy, that John, my friend you are keeping writing and you keep your poetical spirit and energy.

 

Prayers for him.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

yes aleksandra this is nicely done i agree with you. i miss are dear freind also. i like the touches about the earth being a live being because that is what i believe and she is called gaia.

 

larsen aka victor

 

btw miss talking to ya aleks where are you?

 

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Aleksandra

Hey Vic. how are you. I am writing to you on msn but you seems sleeping then icon_biggrin.png. And also some problems around and connection too. So tell me when you are there. Is your com good now? icon_biggrin.png

 

And yes I miss our John too.

ok Victor see ya icon_wink.gif

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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goldenlangur

Hi Mister Poet,

 

Long time no see or hear! This poem is quite sparse compared to some of the prose pome like works you''ve posted before; but it's still packed with great images and that wonderful eye for detail that you have, still works well here.

 

Love the "skinless universe" - raw, arresting and inspired!

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Aleksandra

Thanks for commenting my friends on John's work. He would be glad to read our comments, so after some time I am gonna send to him.

 

Thank you from his name

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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I agree. This is a good write. Must be reading Williams.

"Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach

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Hey Mr. P!

aleksandra wrote:

The night

tonight is bright

with the full moon

hanging low

showing the face

of the partially naked

...
earth

to the skinless universe.

Moon, face, partially naked, hanging low, skinless ... all highly sensual and thought-provoking. I like how you captured the moment.

 

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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