dedalus Posted November 28, 2010 Share Posted November 28, 2010 (edited) Pannerola pergolum, dammenola ergo sum; penda quenda senda mi, pende quende send to me amore, more amore. Oremus, Tio Rabbita, non che la habita: negroni vobiscum. Bebemus, bebe. Carolina del sul io non sempre ein fool wie du so da denkst devochka. Non, non, pas encore, nein, nicht any more, malum nahii, níl is agam: ye to bahot acchaa. DNA veni, out to play. Ma... ma... manaqua alam nunc, tra la ... faquin é slam dunc! Edited December 3, 2010 by dedalus Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted November 28, 2010 Share Posted November 28, 2010 Gonna need some help with this one, Brendan. Had this been posted by some new member, I would have had to refer him to the part in the rules which states that IV. English Language Poetry Magnum Opus is primarily an English language bulletin board. Topics, posts, and discussions (with the exception of those carried on using the private messaging feature) should be in English. Poems in languages other than English may be posted in the World Poetry section. The poster should strive to include an English translation of any such poem, but, in any case, ensuing and related discussions must be in English. Topics and posts that are not in accordance with this rule may be locked or deleted by the administration in its sole discretion. But okay, it's our Brendan, and he probably wouldn't do something that would piss us off ... like post porn in Elvish ... or calls to Jihad in Arabic. Anyway, I'm hoping you'll provide a translation (or at least give some background if a translation isn't practical) if this isn't in a language you made up. To me it looks like a mix of Arabic, Irish, German, English, Spanish, Latin, and then some. Tony :) Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waxwings Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 Clever! Clever way to sneak a few past censorship. When did Uncle Remus start playing basketball? Latin is a language dead. That's plain enough to see. It killed off all the Romans, And now it's killing thee. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 Huh? ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dedalus Posted December 3, 2010 Author Share Posted December 3, 2010 OK, guys, sorry to keep you waiting. It is NOT hidden porn, Tony, except maybe for the last line with it's "(adj) slam dunk!"; instead it is kind of a lazy stroll through four or five languages on the lookout for sounds and rhythms and with a bit of made-up language at the interstices. It's an exercise (a far too energetic word) in poetry as sheer sound. That's one of the things I'm interested in so I just went there for the fun of it. One of the best responses I have received -- on another site, natch ... "My God, you speak such good Italian!". I love it. Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rumisong Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 Well, if it's intended to "make no sense", then I'm all for it! (See PMO thread titled: "Sentences that Make No Sense", here.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted December 7, 2010 Share Posted December 7, 2010 OK, guys, sorry to keep you waiting. It is NOT hidden porn, Tony ... Whew! I'm relieved! And thank you, Brendan, for coming back with this explanation: ... instead it is kind of a lazy stroll through four or five languages on the lookout for sounds and rhythms and with a bit of made-up language at the interstices. It's an exercise (a far too energetic word) in poetry as sheer sound. That's one of the things I'm interested in so I just went there for the fun of it. One of the best responses I have received -- on another site, natch ... "My God, you speak such good Italian!". I love it. Poetry as sheer sound ... Works for me! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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