JoelJosol Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 She is not done yet browsing his thoughts like she does his magazines, scanning each one from his eyes, determined to find an image of herself in the centerfold of his mind. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 Joel this is so nice written and wonderful sound. This poem makes beautiful picture. I loved it. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 (edited) Hi Joel, I love this small poem. It says just enough. A unique concept cleverly laid out, I could almost see the pages of the magazine turning. Nice! ~~Tink Edited April 21, 2009 by Tinker Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted April 21, 2009 Author Share Posted April 21, 2009 Thank you, Alek and Tink. I'm glad the metaphor worked out. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 The centerfold/of his mind is a wonderful expression! Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted April 21, 2009 Author Share Posted April 21, 2009 Actually, tony, I was surprised myself after keying it on the screen. I told myself, that's it. I am done :-) Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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