Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 talking to angels i was delerious and not feeling well. i looked into the sun and saw my guardian angels. i was hospitalized for my third bout with pnemonia in three months. i thought i heard angels voices say it is not my time, yet. i was burning on fire as you say my body felt like it was raging on fire. i prayed to god for mercy and the antibioctics the doctors prescribed me did there job on my body. i looked to the highest and said WHY! enough is enough/ Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 Ah Victor my friend, I am so sad to hear all of this bad experience what you go through. It nice that you always express your feelings and your sadness with words. I pray for you my friend. Be fine. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 Hi Victor, I'm sorry to hear about your latest complication. I'm glad you're okay and posting again. This one's acute, especially these lines: Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote: i was delerious and not feeling well. i looked into the sun and saw my guardian angels. i was hospitalized for my third bout with pnemonia in three months. i thought i heard angels voices say it is not my time, yet. i was burning on fire as you say my body felt like it was raging on fire. i prayed to god for mercy and the antibioctics the doctors prescribed me did there job on my body. i looked to the highest and said WHY! enough is enough/ The first line sets the tone, and I like it! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 Hello victor, How good to see you posting again albeit this poem is laden with your painful experience of illness. You bring to life for the reader the drifting in and out of consciousness. These lines have a poignancy which is quite moving: Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote: i thought i heard angels voices say it is not my time, yet. ..... i prayed to god for mercy and the antibioctics the doctors prescribed me did there job on my body. i looked to the highest and said WHY! enough is enough/ I admire your courage in coping with so many health problems and returning with your voice, still strong. You're in my prayers. goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 11, 2009 Author Share Posted May 11, 2009 thanks for the comments aleks, tony, and goldenlangur. much appreciated. i really wonder how much wear and tear the body can take lol. larsen aka victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 Hello victor, You've come thus far and we here at PMO are full of admiration for your courage and spirit. With thoughts and prayers, goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 11, 2009 Author Share Posted May 11, 2009 thanks goldenlangur your thoughts are always apreciated especially thoughtful ones as yours, vic Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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