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Larsen M. Callirhoe
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Larsen M. Callirhoe

talking to angels

 

i was delerious and not feeling well.

i looked into the sun and saw my guardian angels.

i was hospitalized for my third bout with pnemonia

in three months.

 

i thought i heard angels voices say it is not my time, yet.

i was burning on fire as you say my body felt

like it was raging on fire.

 

i prayed to god for mercy and the antibioctics

the doctors prescribed me did there job on my body.

i looked to the highest and said WHY! enough is enough/

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Aleksandra

Ah Victor my friend, I am so sad to hear all of this bad experience what you go through. It nice that you always express your feelings and your sadness with words.

 

I pray for you my friend. Be fine.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Hi Victor,

 

I'm sorry to hear about your latest complication. I'm glad you're okay and posting again.

 

This one's acute, especially these lines:

Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote:

 

i was delerious and not feeling well.

i looked into the sun and saw my guardian angels.

i was hospitalized for my third bout with pnemonia

in three months.

 

i thought i heard angels voices say it is not my time, yet.

i was burning on fire as you say my body felt

like it was raging on fire.

 

i prayed to god for mercy and the antibioctics

the doctors prescribed me did there job on my body.

i looked to the highest and said WHY! enough is enough
/

The first line sets the tone, and I like it!

 

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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goldenlangur

Hello victor,

 

How good to see you posting again albeit this poem is laden with your painful experience of illness. You bring to life for the reader the drifting in and out of consciousness.

 

These lines have a poignancy which is quite moving:

 

 

Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote:

 

i thought i heard angels voices say it is not my time, yet.

 

.....

i prayed to god for mercy and the antibioctics

the doctors prescribed me did there job on my body.

i looked to the highest and said WHY! enough is enough/

 

 

I admire your courage in coping with so many health problems and returning with your voice, still strong.

 

You're in my prayers.

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

thanks for the comments aleks, tony, and goldenlangur. much appreciated. i really wonder how much wear and tear the body can take lol.

 

larsen aka victor

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goldenlangur

Hello victor,

 

You've come thus far and we here at PMO are full of admiration for your courage and spirit.

 

With thoughts and prayers,

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

thanks goldenlangur your thoughts are always apreciated especially thoughtful ones as yours,

 

vic

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