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Larsen M. Callirhoe
Posted (edited)

Passionate Desire dedicated to anyomous!

 

i worship your flesh

the beauty i desire

the fragrances of wild flowers

a tear on my cheek

i want you like a flame in a fire

 

touch me

speak to passion

you have risen my desire

make love to me

i am a virgin noble lord

 

in the night'

you whisper to me in my dreams

thou says come to me master

i only want to hold your flesh next to me

touch my heart

 

i worship nature

i love the force

you take me

drink the wine of my seed

i will eat the honey nectar

of your flowing rivers

 

yes i desire you

your words

melt my heart

i want a lover let me be him

 

so sweet is your kiss

let it be true

your words form my foundation

my body is yours

take me in the wind.

 

i am a aristocratic poet

i drink my wine

i love my fine liguer

i drink flavored coffees

and i drink herbal teas

but most of all

i want your breats in my mouth

i want the milk

you nuture me with.

 

i want my words

to grow in your heart

i hope i sedduce

i am a thief in the night

i will take from you

what i want.

 

i will give you orgasms

that touch the realm

of the city in the clouds

will you be my lover

since you call out my name

with passionate words

i am your lover

come to me

my beauty.

Edited by Larsen M. Callirhoe

Larsen M. Callirhoe

Posted

A passionate, steamy dedication, Victor. I love how you throw "thou says come to me master" into the mix.

 

And I love how the speaker presents himself:

i am a aristocratic poet

i drink my wine

i love my fine liguer

i drink flavored coffees

and i drink herbal teas ...

 

It reads like an excerpt from his curriculum vitae. He's a man of distinction; he takes what he wants and gives what he deems is desirable. Very much enjoyed.

 

Tony :)

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

  • 2 weeks later...
goldenlangur
Posted

Hi victor,

 

Good to read your work again. :D

 

You use images of nature adeptly to evoke passion:

 

 

I worship your flesh

the beauty i desire

the fragrances of wild flowers

a tear on my cheek

i want you like a flame in a fire

 

 

 

There is desire and anguish - a potent combination.

 

 

Thank you.

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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