Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted February 28, 2011 Share Posted February 28, 2011 (edited) Passionate Desire dedicated to anyomous! i worship your flesh the beauty i desire the fragrances of wild flowers a tear on my cheek i want you like a flame in a fire touch me speak to passion you have risen my desire make love to me i am a virgin noble lord in the night' you whisper to me in my dreams thou says come to me master i only want to hold your flesh next to me touch my heart i worship nature i love the force you take me drink the wine of my seed i will eat the honey nectar of your flowing rivers yes i desire you your words melt my heart i want a lover let me be him so sweet is your kiss let it be true your words form my foundation my body is yours take me in the wind. i am a aristocratic poet i drink my wine i love my fine liguer i drink flavored coffees and i drink herbal teas but most of all i want your breats in my mouth i want the milk you nuture me with. i want my words to grow in your heart i hope i sedduce i am a thief in the night i will take from you what i want. i will give you orgasms that touch the realm of the city in the clouds will you be my lover since you call out my name with passionate words i am your lover come to me my beauty. Edited March 2, 2011 by Larsen M. Callirhoe Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted March 1, 2011 Share Posted March 1, 2011 A passionate, steamy dedication, Victor. I love how you throw "thou says come to me master" into the mix. And I love how the speaker presents himself: i am a aristocratic poet i drink my wine i love my fine liguer i drink flavored coffees and i drink herbal teas ... It reads like an excerpt from his curriculum vitae. He's a man of distinction; he takes what he wants and gives what he deems is desirable. Very much enjoyed. Tony :) Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 Hi victor, Good to read your work again. :D You use images of nature adeptly to evoke passion: I worship your fleshthe beauty i desire the fragrances of wild flowers a tear on my cheek i want you like a flame in a fire There is desire and anguish - a potent combination. Thank you. Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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