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Don't Walk Out That Door


Larsen M. Callirhoe
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Larsen M. Callirhoe

Don't Walk Out That Door

 

 

Don't you see the stars

shining on us up above.

Yesterday has come and gone.

 

Without a kiss goodbye

till we meet again.

 

I love you

from the bottom of my heart.

 

Don't you know

you are the wind

that stirs my heart.

 

I know the destroyer wants you.

What am I to do.

 

I follow my hearts desire.

I know I should of kept

the ring of promise

you gave to me.

 

Please don't fall in love

with another man.

 

I would let you go amongst the stars

if you didn't love me anymore.

 

The passion I felt for you

has always been there

since the beginning of time.

 

Oh Nalene you are the wind

that moves the mountains

in my heart.

 

I would let you go

if you wanted to leave.

 

But I would never look at life

the same again.

 

Oh Please Don't go.

I'm asking for another chance.

 

As the rain that falls

from the grey sky up above.

My eyes are those tear drops

that fall down from up above.

 

All I can do is ask for you to do

is not to leave,

but stay close to my heart.

When the morning comes

I want you next to my side.

 

Oh please don't go.

I am asking you

from the bottom of my heart.

 

Oh Nalene please don't go.

I love you so much.

 

It's been many life times it seems

remember the breeze

the first time we gazed

at one another.

 

Oh Nalene, Please don't go.

All I am asking, is for another chance.

Can't you see my heart is broken

and has fallen apart.

 

The blood of my heart

has stained the world.

Oh please don't go.

All I am is asking for is another chance.

I threw away the ring of promise.

If I hadn't given to a bird from up above.

It would have bleen stolen from me anyway.

 

So Nalane don't you see

Don't walk out that door.

I am asking you not to leave.

I love you from the bottom of my heart.

My heart is broken.

I am such a fool

to let you go to the wind

all you need to know

is you are the wind

that stirs my heart.

And that I love you so.

One day I will make you honorable

I promise you this.

 

I will be your knight in shining armor.

I will be your prince

and you will be my lovely wild flower

of a angel. So please don't walk out that door.

Or my world will be bitter and cold.

 

Oh Nalene, I love you so much.

You are the wind that stirs my heart.

and I am lost in the wind.

I will marry you

and you will be my princesses.

Edited by Larsen M. Callirhoe

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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The anxiety brought on by feelings of love and longing is augmented by the threat of an external, metaphysical force:

 

I know the destroyer wants you.

What am I to do.

 

Enjoyed the lyrical flow, Victor.

 

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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abstrect-christ

although it's good you kept it at average joe language there is the odd average joe mistake such as the 'of' in this first line

"I know I should of kept

the ring of promise"

 

and lines that, to me, atleast need a question mark:

"Can't you see my heart is broken

and has fallen apart."

 

typo's:

"It would have bleen stolen from me anyway." *been

"of a angel." *an

and you will be my princesses. *princess? Or is it purposely spelt as more than one princess?

 

otherwise, it was good, would be better with a beat behind it but you could always just add that later right?

Pinhead

"Unbearable, isn't it? The suffering of strangers, the agony of friends.

There is a secret song at the center of the world, Joey, and its sound is like razors through flesh."

Joey

"I don't believe you."

Pinhead

"Oh come, you can hear its faint echo right now. I'm here to turn up the volume.

To press the stinking face of humanity into the dark blood of its own secret heart."

"There's a starving beast inside my chest
playing with me until he's bored
Then, slowly burying his tusks in my flesh
crawling his way out he rips open old wounds

When I reach for the knife placed on the bedside table
its blade reflects my determined face
to plant it in my chest
and carve a hole so deep it snaps my veins

Hollow me out, I want to feel empty"
-- "Being Able To Feel Nothing" by Oathbreaker

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aBPy3xNwwL8

"Sky turns to a deeper grey

the sun fades by the moon

hell's come from the distant hills

tortures dreams of the doomed

and they pray, yet they prey

and they pray, still they prey"
-- "Still They Prey" by Cough

https://soundcloud.com/relapserecords/sets/cough-still-they-pray

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