Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 A PSALM TO ELENA 1. I LOOKED INTO MY DREAMS AND SAW A VISION OF HOPE! FLOATING IN THE HORIZON OF MY THOUGHTS (CLOUDS)! FILLED WITH TEARS OF A STAR NAMED HEIDI REJOICING IN THE EVERLASTING PERCEPTION OF OUR SOULS DELIGHT IN THE SUMMER TIME THAT IS SCORCHING THE EARTH. TWO SPIRITS GUIDED BY DESIRES OF ROMANCE. 2. ANOTHER STAR NAMED SAMUEL WORDS NEVER FELL TO THE GROUND TO DIE. HEIDI GAVE ME WORDS TO SAY TO YOU. A GUARDAIN OF YOUR HEARTS SAKE! HUGS AND KISSES WITH A SMILE ON HER FACE. 3. YOU ARE ONE OF THE SEVEN SPIRIT CHILDREN AT THE WELL OF RUEL! A SYMBOL OF THE SEVEN DAUGHTERS OF WISDOM! YOU ARE ALL DOVES THAT WILL ATTACH YOUR BEAUTY, GRACE, DIGNITY AND VALOUR TO MY BLOOD! SEEKING THE CROWN OF FAITH AND HOPE IN LOVE. PEACE AND SERENITY (CALMNESS) WAS IN OUR DESTINY FOR US TO MEET! 4. I SAW YOU SWIMMING IN THE MULTITUDE (ALL DESIGNS) OF WATER (LIFE). THERE IS NO END TO THIS TRUTH (GOD'S CREATION!) I SAW YOUR INNER BEAUTY YOU CAME TOO ME ACROSS THE GREAT SEA (EXPANSE)! YOU CAME OUT OF THE WATER NAKED AND CLEAN TO BE WITH ME! I LOOKED TO THE SINGING STARS OF THE CLEAR NIGHT SKY FOR INSIGHT! 5. I GAVE BREAD OFFERING TO NATURE! WAITING FOR THE DAY WE LOOK INTO ONE ANOTHERS EYES! A WINDOW OF OUR COLORS OF OUR RAINBOW'S PERSONALITIES! O HOW DO I SING TO THE LORD! WONDERING WHY I CRIED TO HIM ALL THE TIME! WHEN I SHOULD HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR A SPIRIT OF LIGHT IN FAITH AND TRUST! 6. YOU MY DEAR SWEET HEART ELENA IS A HUMMING BIRD TO GOD AND ME. A VOICE OF AN ANGEL OF MERCY TOO ME! YOU ARE LIKE A SPARROW THAT IS NUMBERED AND COUNTED BY THE LORD OUR MOST HIGH! I WANT TO FEEL YOUR HEART BEATING WITH MINE! AS WE FLOW DOWN LIFE'S RIVER! SEEING THE SPIRIT CHILDREN DANCING TO THE SINGING VOICES OF THE STARS WATCHING OVER US IN OUR DREAMS AS WE SLEEP IN TIREDNESS! 7. MAY WE FILL EACH OF OUR CUPS WITH JOY! MAY IT NEVER BE FULL! WE WILL DRINK FROM THE CISTERN GIVING TO THE SAVIOUR THAT ALWAYS IS TO DRINK WITH US. MAY OUR BREAD AND THE FRUIT OF THE WOMB ALWAYS TO BE WITH THE LORD! THE FIRST OF SEVEN PSALMS IN THIS FASHION TO THE SEVEN DAUGHTERS AT THE WISHING WELL! LOOKING IN A MIRROR OF THE WELL'S REFLECTION FOR LOVE, BEAUTY, Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 This is exceptional, Victor. It's terrific how you named the stars and threw in definitions (in parentheses) throughout. There's too much good to quote, but I'll highlight these part anyway: YOU ARE ALL DOVES THAT WILL ATTACH YOUR BEAUTY, GRACE,DIGNITY AND VALOUR TO MY BLOOD! ... O HOW DO I SING TO THE LORD! WONDERING WHY I CRIED TO HIM ALL THE TIME! WHEN I SHOULD HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR A SPIRIT OF LIGHT IN FAITH AND TRUST! What a psalm! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abstrect-christ Posted March 22, 2011 Share Posted March 22, 2011 nicely done indeed. ^-^ Quote Pinhead "Unbearable, isn't it? The suffering of strangers, the agony of friends. There is a secret song at the center of the world, Joey, and its sound is like razors through flesh." Joey "I don't believe you." Pinhead "Oh come, you can hear its faint echo right now. I'm here to turn up the volume. To press the stinking face of humanity into the dark blood of its own secret heart." "There's a starving beast inside my chestplaying with me until he's boredThen, slowly burying his tusks in my fleshcrawling his way out he rips open old woundsWhen I reach for the knife placed on the bedside tableits blade reflects my determined faceto plant it in my chestand carve a hole so deep it snaps my veinsHollow me out, I want to feel empty"-- "Being Able To Feel Nothing" by Oathbreakerhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aBPy3xNwwL8 "Sky turns to a deeper grey the sun fades by the moon hell's come from the distant hills tortures dreams of the doomed and they pray, yet they prey and they pray, still they prey"-- "Still They Prey" by Coughhttps://soundcloud.com/relapserecords/sets/cough-still-they-pray Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted April 3, 2011 Share Posted April 3, 2011 Well, this is very beautiful and a special poem, Victor. Divine beauty abounds in this poem. Good job with this one, Vic. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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