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Larsen M. Callirhoe

my first sweet heart

 

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Take my hand

lets skylark tonight

 

Take my hand

and lets have some bacchanalia.

 

We have the stars to gaze at

and the celestial bodies look down at us.

 

My date and I walk along the board walk.

The people pass us by like a blur on a photograph.

 

We kiss and embrace under the stars of the heavens

that twinkle down on us.

 

This cruise on a ship gives us time to reminisce

our wonderful experiences together.

 

We held hands at the mall

and kissed by chorus class.

 

Oh Missy I thought you were grand

until you dumped me for another man.

 

I still can dream can't I.

I will always remember you

because you were my first sweet heart.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Hi Victor,

 

I like how you say lets skylark, and how the celestial bodies look down at us. I also enjoyed the reference to chorus class.

 

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

why thank you tony, your comments and friendship is always welcomed. thanks for being my friend.

 

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Aleksandra

wow Victor my friend. I missed your lovely poems, emotional. This sounds so sensitive and very musical. Nostalgia inside hits, the same as love.

 

I loved the last part of this poem so much:

I still can dream can't I.

I will always remember you

because you were my first sweet heart.

 

The first love always is like that. Stays just memories - ok most of the cases icon_smile.gif. But I am happy if the memories are good and not hurts.

 

Wonderful expressed poem.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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goldenlangur

Hi Victor,

 

It's great to hear your voice again! In this poem you have a combination of celebration of your "first" love, anguish of loss and the ache of longing for a reunion. I'm impressed that you've returned after your long illness with this moving work. This is beautiful!:

 

Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote:

 

Take my hand

lets skylark tonight

 

Take my hand

and lets have some bacchanalia.

 

 

Wonderful to see you around icon_smile.gif

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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