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Happiness

is me an old man at the time when I die

A kiss from you on my smile

as my final goodbye

Aleksandra
Posted

Wonderful expression, short, strong, wise, deep

 

I loved this Jalfrezi

 

Works perfect.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

Posted

You sound like a young Notradamus icon_cyclops.gif with your prediction of the future.....

if only all of us could be sure of such things...

Posted

it's always just a guess Pawn Shop :?

Larsen M. Callirhoe
Posted

interesting write with a twist of fate involved you never know.

 

larsen aka victor

Larsen M. Callirhoe

goldenlangur
Posted

Bless you Jalfrezi! What a marvellous coda you describe here!

 

I chide myself even as I say this - you've got a great haiku-like tone here which could be extended into the tanka - the longer 5 line lyric cousin of the haiku.

 

Thank you for a heavenly thought!

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

Posted

I suppose old would be ok ... so long as one is happy icon_neutral.gif I like the title! icon_razz.gif

 

Tony icon_smile.gif

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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