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Aleksandra

Wonderful expression, short, strong, wise, deep

 

I loved this Jalfrezi

 

Works perfect.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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You sound like a young Notradamus icon_cyclops.gif with your prediction of the future.....

if only all of us could be sure of such things...

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

interesting write with a twist of fate involved you never know.

 

larsen aka victor

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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goldenlangur

Bless you Jalfrezi! What a marvellous coda you describe here!

 

I chide myself even as I say this - you've got a great haiku-like tone here which could be extended into the tanka - the longer 5 line lyric cousin of the haiku.

 

Thank you for a heavenly thought!

 

goldenlangur

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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