pawn shop Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 Frank is a hefty 56 looks kinda like Earnest Hemmingway White bearded, whiskey voiced, Winston smoker saw his dad kill himself with a gun right infront of him too when he was in High school now he sits at the corner of the bar talkative and somewhat curious about others can get loud at times a good carpenter, from what I hear lives with his lady friend for the last 10 years does pot and cocaine and who knows what else Saint Patrick's day in Marlborough into the pub he comes with one hot chick and a straggler decked out in green....though he's Itallian drunk already Frank got thrown out of the pub about 3 hours later by Johnny because he was telling people such things as 'fuck off' 'your not allowed to talk to me again' 'I'll knock you out with one punch' 'I am this bar' 'not another person whose irish' Cute Sabrina, the barmaid, once confronted Frank over something " I'll take your knee caps out " He now respects Sabrina and Sabrina likes him everyone likes him because they can forgive him Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 What a troubled person you portray in Frank. His telling off by Sabrina shows how his "hefty" appearance and his gung-ho mannerisms belie his troubled mind. Another good portrait. goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pawn shop Posted May 12, 2009 Author Share Posted May 12, 2009 Thanks GL for the replies. Frank is troubled only when he drinks and smokes and snorts...... which is frequently.....and for decades.... If he ever cleaned himself up, he'd be an excellant person.... but he'd be bored with it..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 I was drawn to this seeing the expression frank, naturally. Anyway here goes with my first comment on PMO. This is what you said on the tin pawn shop and an interesting and then some portrait of your "hero" what people will call a character. We are not here to judge him, he seems a thoroughly nice chap I would like to hang out with no mistake. This is an acute pen picture and a good read. Hello by the way, Frank. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 You give a good description of this character. He seems harmless enough; I wonder if the drinking and drugs help keep him out of real trouble? As with all your recent work, I enjoyed this read. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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