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My Ink Well Bard

I wish I had your pot of gold

To dip my pen, your words unfold

I'd hold within lighted stars

I'd steal your heart

My -

Ink Well Bard

 

© Rea 27th April 2011

 

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Rea, that's a nice nursery rhyme like short verse. I just didn't get why the 'you' needs to be a pot of gold.

"Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach

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Rea, that's a nice nursery rhyme like short verse. I just didn't get why the 'you' needs to be a pot of gold.

 

 

Hello Joel

It's a metaphor/tribute, to those who write beautiful poetry/and retain self.

Best wishes

Rea

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Rea, that's a nice nursery rhyme like short verse. I just didn't get why the 'you' needs to be a pot of gold.

 

 

Hello Joel

It's a metaphor/tribute, to those who write beautiful poetry/and retain self.

Best wishes

Rea

 

 

Hello Joel

I am not so sure I want to defend a poem, I posted, you referred to as a, Nursery Rhyme!

I wrote the poem as a tribute for one of the members here, who edited one of my poems.

I am just getting to know the workings of the Forum, and I have not commented on many poems, but will do now, unsure, if you had to be a trained critic.

Best wishes

Rea

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Rea,

 

Very enjoyable! No worries- we all step on each others toes here every-once in awhile- But it passes quickly, and (at least in my experience) Is either a misinterpretation or a simple misstep out of wanting the best for the poet.

 

It was a lovely short poem- enjoyed!

 

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A lovely tribute to a fellow poet, Rea. Nice layout on the page, too!

 

Tony :)

 

Hello Tony

Thank you for commenting, it's a thank you/tribute to a fellow poet.

I had written a second version, I may post later.

Best wishes

Rea

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