Tinker Posted May 12, 2009 Posted May 12, 2009 #135 April sunrise wakes poppy field from slumber gold greets my eyes #134 morning breeze floats off the Pacific to moisten my cheek #133 in dawn’s stillness flutter of butterfly wings is the only sound Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
goldenlangur Posted May 12, 2009 Posted May 12, 2009 Hi Tink, It's wonderful to have haiku posted here and three is a bonus! The reflective tone of the first is magical! I love the echoing rhyme in "flutter" and "butterfly". There's a lovely sensuous note in the second haiku: "... moisten my cheek" And the final haiku has drama in the colours you evoke: "gold" and "poppy" - one imagines crimson heads. Thank you for a great haiku moment and more. goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
tonyv Posted May 12, 2009 Posted May 12, 2009 Welcome back, Tinker! I enjoyed these haikus, especially the part about the morning breeze, the reference to the Pacific, and where you write gold greets my eyes. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 12, 2009 Posted May 12, 2009 what a treat to read loved the second one wowsa some ecellent hiakus tink/ larsen Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
Aleksandra Posted May 12, 2009 Posted May 12, 2009 morning breeze floats off the Pacific to moisten my cheek what a vivid haikus Tinker. I loved all. Sound so fresh Thank you for sharing ALeksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia
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