Wistful Poet Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 Bubbly I'm bright and bubbly, unfourtunately not your type, you like girls dark and brooding, but I'd rather be bouncy and happy then deflated and morose, I'd rather be your encouragement and challenger then agree with every dark syallble you say, but since I'm not your type I'll just walk and pray you wake up and hit yourself on the head because you just lost a good one. Quote "If you are faced with a dissappointment or a bad situation ask, will it matter in 10 years? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abstrect-christ Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 lol bubbly is fun. <^-^> Quote Pinhead "Unbearable, isn't it? The suffering of strangers, the agony of friends. There is a secret song at the center of the world, Joey, and its sound is like razors through flesh." Joey "I don't believe you." Pinhead "Oh come, you can hear its faint echo right now. I'm here to turn up the volume. To press the stinking face of humanity into the dark blood of its own secret heart." "There's a starving beast inside my chestplaying with me until he's boredThen, slowly burying his tusks in my fleshcrawling his way out he rips open old woundsWhen I reach for the knife placed on the bedside tableits blade reflects my determined faceto plant it in my chestand carve a hole so deep it snaps my veinsHollow me out, I want to feel empty"-- "Being Able To Feel Nothing" by Oathbreakerhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aBPy3xNwwL8 "Sky turns to a deeper grey the sun fades by the moon hell's come from the distant hills tortures dreams of the doomed and they pray, yet they prey and they pray, still they prey"-- "Still They Prey" by Coughhttps://soundcloud.com/relapserecords/sets/cough-still-they-pray Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 Agree with a-c. I don't care for dark and brooding ... Tony :) Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rosschandler Posted May 6, 2011 Share Posted May 6, 2011 good read. i felt as if you were clearing your throat chokra with this one! blue and radiant energy , like a saphire , allowing you to express yourself in confidence (hence bubbly) and yet stern, as if there was a sublime threat in there....good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Hi Wistful, How nice to see you sharing your writing here again. This one made me smile. I think you have a typo in L8 "than" rather than "then". "than" is a comparison, 'then" is a sequence in time. Fun read! ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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