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Wistful Poet



I'm bright and bubbly,


unfourtunately not your type,


you like girls dark and brooding,


but I'd rather be bouncy and happy


then deflated and morose,


I'd rather be your encouragement and challenger


then agree with every dark syallble you say,


but since I'm not your type


I'll just walk


and pray you wake up and hit yourself on the head


because you just lost a good one.

"If you are faced with a dissappointment or a bad situation ask, will it matter in 10 years?

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lol bubbly is fun. <^-^>


"Unbearable, isn't it? The suffering of strangers, the agony of friends.

There is a secret song at the center of the world, Joey, and its sound is like razors through flesh."


"I don't believe you."


"Oh come, you can hear its faint echo right now. I'm here to turn up the volume.

To press the stinking face of humanity into the dark blood of its own secret heart."

"There's a starving beast inside my chest
playing with me until he's bored
Then, slowly burying his tusks in my flesh
crawling his way out he rips open old wounds

When I reach for the knife placed on the bedside table
its blade reflects my determined face
to plant it in my chest
and carve a hole so deep it snaps my veins

Hollow me out, I want to feel empty"
-- "Being Able To Feel Nothing" by Oathbreaker


"Sky turns to a deeper grey

the sun fades by the moon

hell's come from the distant hills

tortures dreams of the doomed

and they pray, yet they prey

and they pray, still they prey"
-- "Still They Prey" by Cough


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good read. i felt as if you were clearing your throat chokra with this one! blue and radiant energy , like a saphire , allowing you to express yourself in confidence (hence bubbly) and yet stern, as if there was a sublime threat in there....good.

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Hi Wistful, How nice to see you sharing your writing here again. This one made me smile. I think you have a typo in L8 "than" rather than "then". "than" is a comparison, 'then" is a sequence in time.


Fun read!



~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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