Frank E Gibbard Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 High Noon Low Sky Exit Saloon Mordant Eye Take Aim Die or Fame Winning Bid Killed the Kid Fastest Gun Number One How Long For Western Law Cannot Rest In this Wild West Wary Eye Till I Die Live High Until They Till That Lonely Plot On Boot Hill Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 14, 2011 Share Posted May 14, 2011 I've come to appreciate a good western, Frank. It's a category that's often overlooked, yet we have a few of them here. Nicely done. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted May 14, 2011 Author Share Posted May 14, 2011 I've come to appreciate a good western, Frank. It's a category that's often overlooked, yet we have a few of them here. Nicely done. Tony Cheers Tony. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted May 15, 2011 Share Posted May 15, 2011 Hi Frank, This would be a cool intro to one of the old dime novels that romanticized the old west. Spoken like a real cowpoke might tell it with few words, and getting to the nitty gritty. I enjoyed this. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted May 16, 2011 Share Posted May 16, 2011 An interesting subject and unusual format Frank. Well put together. Reminds me a little of Dada poems. :icon_sunny: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abstrect-christ Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 nice utlization of a minimalist rhyme structure indeed. Quote Pinhead "Unbearable, isn't it? The suffering of strangers, the agony of friends. There is a secret song at the center of the world, Joey, and its sound is like razors through flesh." Joey "I don't believe you." Pinhead "Oh come, you can hear its faint echo right now. I'm here to turn up the volume. To press the stinking face of humanity into the dark blood of its own secret heart." "There's a starving beast inside my chestplaying with me until he's boredThen, slowly burying his tusks in my fleshcrawling his way out he rips open old woundsWhen I reach for the knife placed on the bedside tableits blade reflects my determined faceto plant it in my chestand carve a hole so deep it snaps my veinsHollow me out, I want to feel empty"-- "Being Able To Feel Nothing" by Oathbreakerhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aBPy3xNwwL8 "Sky turns to a deeper grey the sun fades by the moon hell's come from the distant hills tortures dreams of the doomed and they pray, yet they prey and they pray, still they prey"-- "Still They Prey" by Coughhttps://soundcloud.com/relapserecords/sets/cough-still-they-pray Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted May 23, 2011 Author Share Posted May 23, 2011 Howdee and thanks Tink Geoff and AC, Frank. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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