dr_con Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 Recipe All my poems are spells he says I’m radioactive enough I muse You can always be more she replies folding the pastry of our conversation. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 And I like her encouraging way, Juris! This one's a bit different for you, and I like it. Nice to see you ... Tony :) Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 Almost want to leave out the conversation, just go with the implication, but that's me. You do succinct well. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rea Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Recipe All my poems are spells he says I'm radioactive enough I muse You can always be more she replies folding the pastry of our conversation. Hello Dr Con Beautiful! precise, compact, a joy to read. I love the metaphor; You can always be more she replied folding the pastry of our conversation Best wishes Rea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted June 11, 2011 Share Posted June 11, 2011 An effective blend of metaphor and innuendo culminating in a brief but tasty thought. :icon_sunny: Benjamin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted June 13, 2011 Author Share Posted June 13, 2011 Thanks All! I have been caught up in my own infinite drama- and have not been writing or critiquing as much as I should/would... So apologies for my absence hope to catch up with y'all soon- Many Thanks for the continued support! DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted August 13, 2011 Share Posted August 13, 2011 Dr.Con, this was so nice short poem of yours. It surprised me. I am used on something else from you, but this one is not less beautiful than others. It's very well constructed, and it's nice to see how you handled it a big difference in your usual style. :) Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 Hi Doc, I tried to stay away, partly because I wanted this one to settle in, partly reluctant to overwrite No. 2 on No. 7 appreciation. But I have to say that this poem excites the kind of wonder and recurrent speculation that keeps me reading poetry. My only real difficulty is in localizing the he, she, and I of the piece, but that may just be part of how the poem means. Thanks for the experience. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted August 20, 2011 Author Share Posted August 20, 2011 Thanks Aleks & David for taking the time to embrace my momentary poetry;-) DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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