Benjamin Posted June 14, 2011 Posted June 14, 2011 (edited) bare skin upon green grass sunbathers bake and roll enjoy their nudity before a stray dog jumps out from the pool fountain oh what a joy to rule the world of man for just a moment and no more watch them shiver at cold daggers that splash bare skin Edited June 17, 2011 by Benjamin Quote
tonyv Posted June 18, 2011 Posted June 18, 2011 Dog's are the best! A competent and appropriate use of form, as always. And this one made me smile, to boot! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Benjamin Posted June 20, 2011 Author Posted June 20, 2011 Hi Tony. Yes, decastich no less :icon_sunny: I thought the two cinquains would mirror nicely the dog's moment of glory over puny mortals nearby. Benjamin Quote
dr_con Posted July 16, 2011 Posted July 16, 2011 Benjamin- A cheerful, well crafted bit of Poesy- Made me smile- Thanks! DC&J Quote thegateless.org
fdelano Posted July 16, 2011 Posted July 16, 2011 bare skinupon green grass sunbathers bake and roll enjoy their nudity before a stray dog jumps out from the pool fountain oh what a joy to rule the world of man for just a moment and no more watch them shiver at cold daggers that splash bare skin Oh how I want to be that dog! Quote
Benjamin Posted July 17, 2011 Author Posted July 17, 2011 Thanks DC&J and Franklin. So many amusing little thoughts seem to go begging. B :icon_sunny: Quote
Frank E Gibbard Posted August 7, 2011 Posted August 7, 2011 Delicious piece of whimsy, for some reason a pun of bear skin sounds as I read the title & repeat line, nice one quirky but true. Quote
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted August 23, 2011 Posted August 23, 2011 lol but true, i knew that or there had to be a catch to the a reason why the dog was mans and is mans best friend. now i know lol. great bit of creativeness. victor michael Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
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