Benjamin Posted June 14, 2011 Share Posted June 14, 2011 (edited) bare skin upon green grass sunbathers bake and roll enjoy their nudity before a stray dog jumps out from the pool fountain oh what a joy to rule the world of man for just a moment and no more watch them shiver at cold daggers that splash bare skin Edited June 17, 2011 by Benjamin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Dog's are the best! A competent and appropriate use of form, as always. And this one made me smile, to boot! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 Hi Tony. Yes, decastich no less :icon_sunny: I thought the two cinquains would mirror nicely the dog's moment of glory over puny mortals nearby. Benjamin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 Benjamin- A cheerful, well crafted bit of Poesy- Made me smile- Thanks! DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 bare skinupon green grass sunbathers bake and roll enjoy their nudity before a stray dog jumps out from the pool fountain oh what a joy to rule the world of man for just a moment and no more watch them shiver at cold daggers that splash bare skin Oh how I want to be that dog! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted July 17, 2011 Author Share Posted July 17, 2011 Thanks DC&J and Franklin. So many amusing little thoughts seem to go begging. B :icon_sunny: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted August 7, 2011 Share Posted August 7, 2011 Delicious piece of whimsy, for some reason a pun of bear skin sounds as I read the title & repeat line, nice one quirky but true. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted August 23, 2011 Share Posted August 23, 2011 lol but true, i knew that or there had to be a catch to the a reason why the dog was mans and is mans best friend. now i know lol. great bit of creativeness. victor michael Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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