Rea Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 If I had a second, for every minute that I thought you're the most beautiful... dream... my heart hath ever sought But I don't even see you not a whisker of your face I'm loving a writing pen an imaginary trace Are you really Oh! so special? or just shy with cautious tone? To lock your heart and love behind a dark blue screen Or are you so sensational you make passion woo with fire? Raise the silence in the heavens and drown with hells empire? If this is just a vision? a book without a dream! Show your face surrender fate shatter dark blue screen © Rea 6th May 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Very, very nice. A poetically lovely, entreaty. I like how the setting, the "on-line" age, is ancillary and not overpowering. It gives the work a sense of timelessness. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rea Posted July 10, 2011 Author Share Posted July 10, 2011 Very, very nice. A poetically lovely, entreaty. I like how the setting, the "on-line" age, is ancillary and not overpowering. It gives the work a sense of timelessness. Tony Hello Tony Thank you for reading and commenting, appreciated. Warm regards Rea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 10, 2011 Share Posted July 10, 2011 Rea i am impressed. your poetry is very exquiste and exceptional. you have a knack and uncanny way of putting words into some of the best poems i have ever read. it seems to come so natural for you. i have been writing poems for quite a while now and written a few so perfect that they have been taken off of Earth/Gaia by higher up spirits before some entity factions cursed them. victor michael Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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