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Mirrors Reflecting Passions


Rea
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Mirrors reflecting passions

 

Did your silence, meet and greet

and beat the burning chord?

Are your passions still entwined

and shining with the word?

 

Is time and loss, a parting,

a silent, losing sound?

Mirrors reflecting passions

buried under ground.

 

© Rea 3rd March 2009

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I think this poem is imaginative, creative, and felt. I would write it differently. I find myself wondering about other word choices, but then I am not you and would no doubt produce something more bloodless.

 

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  • 3 weeks later...

Living, breathing, passionate and clear- I really enjoyed this brief perceptive piece!

 

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