Rea Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 (edited) Mirrors reflecting passions Did your silence, meet and greet and beat the burning chord? Are your passions still entwined and shining with the word? Is time and loss, a parting, a silent, losing sound? Mirrors reflecting passions buried under ground. © Rea 3rd March 2009 Edited June 18, 2011 by Rea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 I think this poem is imaginative, creative, and felt. I would write it differently. I find myself wondering about other word choices, but then I am not you and would no doubt produce something more bloodless. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Living, breathing, passionate and clear- I really enjoyed this brief perceptive piece! DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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