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The old lighthouse kept me

for many a year and through

the moon, beauty's worth became

clear. In childhood, my parents'

lighthouse kept ships of beauty,

ships of art and me apart. The light

from my ghostly wife warns me of

the angel of death who sits waiting

on death's rock- can he not see my

eyes are still lit?

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Fascinating Eclipse- To my ear it sounded musical and yet a bit rough- But the cold dark images work- The scene is crystal clear, Ahh I stumbled on the repetition of Beauty- But thru no fault of yours- Rather the deeply buried disciplinarian came out- Loved the lyrical nature of this!

 

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

lighthouses always fascinated me. beautify reflection with wonderful imagery.

 

much enjoyed the read eclipse.

 

victor michael

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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