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The tattooed clock on my back is ticking,

the glass baby inside me is kicking,

the wind helps me give birth

to this exotic child of a different earth.

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A well executed brief and to the point imagist SF poem- Clear as a bell yet perfectly ephemeral food for the Fin de siècle gastronome to digest;-)

 

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

love the word usage and play. opening and last liness are clever...

 

 

 

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