eclipse Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 A fragmented moon is reflected on the ocean- the lunar pearl has listened to pagans and wars natives seek power that doesn't exist in it's ancient stores. I hold a sea shell up to the night winds and whisper a question into the shell- I walk across the ocean of myself with the moon reflected perfectly.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted August 7, 2011 Share Posted August 7, 2011 I like this one, too, Eclipse. Follows a serene trail out from the recent cauldrons seething in your work. Fine imagery and spare language, letting the power come through and capture the reader. Refrains. The reflection persists... - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted August 8, 2011 Share Posted August 8, 2011 I like this, too, Eclipse. "Natives seek power that doesn't exist" is striking and memorable. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 I keep returning to this piece. So quietly cosmic and pregnant with meaning. Not near enough reads. Yes, I am moving it to the top of the reading list. Somebody slap me if that is bad! - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 Agree with the above sentiments- warm, mysterious (don't know where warm comes from... a certain feel;-) and cosmic in its creativity;-) DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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