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A fragmented moon is reflected on the ocean-

the lunar pearl has listened to pagans and wars

natives seek power that doesn't exist in it's

ancient stores. I hold a sea shell up to the night

winds and whisper a question into the shell-

I walk across the ocean of myself with the

moon reflected perfectly..

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David W. Parsley

I like this one, too, Eclipse. Follows a serene trail out from the recent cauldrons seething in your work. Fine imagery and spare language, letting the power come through and capture the reader. Refrains. The reflection persists...

 

- Dave

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David W. Parsley

I keep returning to this piece. So quietly cosmic and pregnant with meaning. Not near enough reads.

 

Yes, I am moving it to the top of the reading list. Somebody slap me if that is bad! :rolleyes:

 

- Dave

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Agree with the above sentiments- warm, mysterious (don't know where warm comes from... a certain feel;-) and cosmic in its creativity;-)

 

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