dr_con Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 Ground We all have demons she says And mine are unfurling their wings I try to take full responsibility the choice of wax when flying so close to the Sun seems to have been a bad decision made from pride and maybe anger filling that hole in the center where innocence once lived Before that great fall Gravity’s gift all flying is falling How soon we forget fear and excitement are matters of pers- pective this relation to ground. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 Hmmmmm DC, This is a thinker. Or I am just tired. I love this... Before that great fallGravity’s gift all flying is falling ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted August 22, 2011 Share Posted August 22, 2011 Daedalus made some suspect choices. All us daedali do... I like it. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted August 22, 2011 Share Posted August 22, 2011 :wine2: wow dr con. my sentiments think along this line all but this part that tink highlighted also. Before that great fallGravity’s gift all flying is falling dr con, should i look at this spiritually as questioning this myth as truth or fallacy of the quote i picked from your poem? or should i look at this sstatement literally as what they wrote to understanding either a metaphor or analogy to understanding history? is this to question that situation? or should i just look at this as the perspective of the authors of those that wrote about per sa' the book of genesis or other authurs that talk about this touchy subect. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted August 23, 2011 Share Posted August 23, 2011 Enjoyed the delve into recklessness, Juris. Yes, even when it comes to electricity, it all comes back to ground. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted August 27, 2011 Share Posted August 27, 2011 Well, my words next to this poem are worthless. Juris, this poem is amazing and, I loved it. All what, I can tell is that I am amazed and pleased to read your poem. Thank you. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted September 4, 2011 Share Posted September 4, 2011 A focussed piece of writing that resonates all the more for that. enjoyed re-visiting badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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