eclipse Posted August 22, 2011 Share Posted August 22, 2011 A blind man fishes in a dried up river, ghosts provide sounds of water that does not flow and wind that does not blow. The blind man gets a bite and reels himself in he sees himself in death and the reaper will always win. In death he still casts his rod and reels souls in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted August 24, 2011 Share Posted August 24, 2011 Nice bizarre angle eclipse. Good reading, thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted August 27, 2011 Share Posted August 27, 2011 Ouch, eclipse. This poem is haunting. I loved the meaning. This poem creates a special atmosphere. Thank you for posting it. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted August 28, 2011 Share Posted August 28, 2011 very philosophical. your poem is very deep. when i first seriously delved into starting to read and write poetery i was lost. i know i have come a ong way learning the craft from such excellent teachers as yourself. awesome poem. thank you. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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