Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 the beauty of nature when i look to the stars i see my lovers eyes. i go to the seashore and there is my beloved bathing in the water. i stir the water making passionate love with her. we dance with the stars of heaven. the sun shines on us after the moonlight is gone, we toast with red wine are union, we marry in white, everyone says the marriage is a grand site. white doves are released to the air when we kiss and say i do to one another. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 Lovely expressed Victor. So emotional imageries and all expressions are full with feelings and sense. This gives perfect love scene. I loved this poem my friend Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 Hello Victor, In the eyes of love every place is suffused with memories and indeed the presence of the loved one. You bring this out in some beautiful images. I quote a few of my favorite: Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote: ... i stir the water making passionate love with her. we dance with the stars of heaven. the sun shines on us after the moonlight is gone, How tender and moving! goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 13, 2009 Author Share Posted May 13, 2009 bump i believe this one is worth reading again. thanks for comments aleks and GL. vic Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 This poem seems to transcend from the imaginary, to reality, and back. This gives it an otherworldly feel. For some reason, these are the lines that transport me the most: Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote: when i look to the stars i see my lovers eyes. i go to the seashore and there is my beloved bathing in the water .... everyone says the marriage is a grand site. Very romantic. I can feel the longing throughout. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote: bump i believe this one is worth reading again. thanks for comments aleks and GL. vic Yes Vic you are right. This poem is so worth, and I loved. And always is a pleasure to read and feel your romantic poetical voice. Take care my friend Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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