fdelano Posted September 27, 2011 Share Posted September 27, 2011 Sumptuous A touch of finger tips across white linen as red wine is served in tall-stems sets the moment, eyes meeting , communicating things to come A perfect bouquet from the glasses held over polished plates of rare delights hardly touched as the two talk and find reason to slip a morsel or two on the other’s plate. After polite adieus with the genial staff, the pair wanders slowly to the elevator that lifts them and their spirits in anticipation of slow love in the glow of darkness. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted September 27, 2011 Share Posted September 27, 2011 I can feel the undercurrents of this interlude. "glow of darkness" is nice. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted September 28, 2011 Share Posted September 28, 2011 Very smooth, Franklin. Your poem reminds me of a personal favorite poem of mine. Here's the LINK. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted September 29, 2011 Author Share Posted September 29, 2011 Very smooth, Franklin. Your poem reminds me of a personal favorite poem of mine. Here's the LINK. Tony Thanks Tony. Enjolyed reading a real poem. Paco Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted September 29, 2011 Share Posted September 29, 2011 Very smooth, Franklin. Your poem reminds me of a personal favorite poem of mine. Here's the LINK. Tony Thanks Tony. Enjolyed reading a real poem. Paco Well, Franklin, it was meant as a compliment. If it didn't come across that way, I'm sorry. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted September 29, 2011 Share Posted September 29, 2011 Being something of a people-watcher myself, I enjoyed this. Just the right amount of information and assumption. Nice one Franklin. G. :icon_sunny: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted September 29, 2011 Share Posted September 29, 2011 enjoyed reaing this franklin it is a excllent poem. the second verse is perfection of the metaphorical view point you present the reader with. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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