Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 I Live On Borrowed Time.... I live on borrowed time now. for a car acident changed my life. I now day dream about the past.. I used to live life so carefree. Now I want to dance with a lover and twirl all around dancing.about. I want to walk on the clouds and touch another dimension. I want to reach horizons of birds soaring and where angels flock in circles of love. Now I am paralyzed laying in bed and wonder why lovers come and go. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted October 24, 2011 Share Posted October 24, 2011 Victor, it has your trademark blend of past, present, and future. Concise. This one's just right. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted October 25, 2011 Author Share Posted October 25, 2011 i am turning a new leaf. i will improve and do the best ton0ot write depressing poetry. this will be a sonnet soon. lol thank you for responding,' victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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