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I Live On Borrowed Time


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Larsen M. Callirhoe
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I Live On Borrowed Time....

 

I live on borrowed time now.

for a car acident changed my life.

I now day dream about the past..

I used to live life so carefree.

Now I want to dance with a lover

and twirl all around dancing.about.

 

I want to walk on the clouds

and touch another dimension.

I want to reach horizons of birds soaring

and where angels flock in circles of love.

Now I am paralyzed laying in bed

and wonder why lovers come and go.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

  • 2 weeks later...
Posted

Victor, it has your trademark blend of past, present, and future. Concise. This one's just right.

 

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

Larsen M. Callirhoe
Posted

i am turning a new leaf. i will improve and do the best ton0ot write depressing poetry. this will be a sonnet soon. lol thank you for responding,'

 

victor

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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