eclipse Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 The last song of a nightingale found me standing on the shore it stored its secrets in my heart guiding me to the one i adore. Take my wounded hand we will walk across the earth collect the treasures from the light and dark to give our love its rebirth. I hear your heartbeat echo in the sunrise i make contact with infinity in the depth of your eyes i will sell the nightingales song and buy you the four seasons be my own true love my soul is fatigued from supplying you with reasons. The darkness in your soul sinned against the ghostly caroling offspring of the wind, i want to see your loveliness brighten with the night time skies, from the remains of your dreams provide our silence with its alibis. The tides and the sea are waiting for the nightingale to tell our story, with the rays of the sun and moon i will rebuild your heart so it is sensitive when it is light and dark along with the nightingale and her song we will never again be apart. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 wow so beautifully composed eclipse. i really enjoyed reading this. makes me want to write a love poem to my beloved Marianna or Nalene my mistress lol. i hope others read this and comment on your poem here. it would be sad if others passed by this treat of yours here you left for others to taste dangling in the air like a sad nightingale chiirping away. the imagery kiis beautiful and the syntax for this is perfect victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 Oh, this is lovely, Eclipse. You write very well. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 What a refreshing change to read sincere, well written love poetry without having to wade through layers of metaphor. Enjoyed. Benjamin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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