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Angels fell and so did Man

Strangled by the Angel’s hand

Mangled and left in this land

To rot forgotten, always aching

Told of things and taught their making

Secret gifts not for the taking

Golden rings and coronets

Ornamental amulets

Idols draped across their necks

Things they once swore to protect

The Mysteries including sex

Forbidden words in hidden texts

Unspoken concepts such as Death

And the notion we regret

The sanctimony of our breath

They filled the world with wickedness

Iniquities, disease and stress

From Uzza to Asmodeus

Esau could attest to this

For Sammael watched over him

Father of the Nephilim

Who took Eisheth Zenunim,

Igat, Lilith and Naamah

To be his brides upon his fall

The Succubi who fuck us all

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I like the tone... but me being agnostic and a little pessimistic about man like it for it's darkness and condemnation of man and the heavens a little.


hehehe reminded me of my new reading material that I can't put down... Preacher graphic novels.


unless I read it wrong that is.


"Unbearable, isn't it? The suffering of strangers, the agony of friends.

There is a secret song at the center of the world, Joey, and its sound is like razors through flesh."


"I don't believe you."


"Oh come, you can hear its faint echo right now. I'm here to turn up the volume.

To press the stinking face of humanity into the dark blood of its own secret heart."

"There's a starving beast inside my chest
playing with me until he's bored
Then, slowly burying his tusks in my flesh
crawling his way out he rips open old wounds

When I reach for the knife placed on the bedside table
its blade reflects my determined face
to plant it in my chest
and carve a hole so deep it snaps my veins

Hollow me out, I want to feel empty"
-- "Being Able To Feel Nothing" by Oathbreaker


"Sky turns to a deeper grey

the sun fades by the moon

hell's come from the distant hills

tortures dreams of the doomed

and they pray, yet they prey

and they pray, still they prey"
-- "Still They Prey" by Cough


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you read it correct...but how the fall of man was preceded by the fall of the angles...

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