jainrohit Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 Love is like rubber , soft and elastic Will break away if , the pressure's drastic Even god can't solve lover's dilemma To praise her beauty what new words tospeak ?? Will knowledge be valued in today's world Where everything's at distance of a click Words are not like man, they know not borders from arabic "iblis " to alembic How can one have natural trees on mars We should suffice with flowers of plastic We all are result of imperfection Then whats the need to be so specific ?? Poetry takes life to learn O "rohit" Not everyone can understand this trick rhyme scheme --- > aa-ba-ca-da-ea-fa-ga-ha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 amazing couplets rhyming scheme jainrohit. much enjoyed the layout as i read along. thank you. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 Some fresh stuff, jainrohit. Even God can't solve lovers' dilemma. How true! And everything's at distance of a click leads naturally to How can one have natural trees on Mars? I loved all of it. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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