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Love is like rubber , soft and elastic

Will break away if , the pressure's drastic

 

 

Even god can't solve lover's dilemma

To praise her beauty what new words tospeak ??

 

Will knowledge be valued in today's world

Where everything's at distance of a click

 

 

Words are not like man, they know not borders

from arabic "iblis " to alembic

 

How can one have natural trees on mars

We should suffice with flowers of plastic

 

We all are result of imperfection

Then whats the need to be so specific ??

 

Poetry takes life to learn O "rohit"

Not everyone can understand this trick

 

 

 

 

 

rhyme scheme --- > aa-ba-ca-da-ea-fa-ga-ha

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

amazing couplets rhyming scheme jainrohit. much enjoyed the layout as i read along. thank you.

 

victor

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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  • 2 weeks later...

Some fresh stuff, jainrohit. Even God can't solve lovers' dilemma. How true! And everything's at distance of a click leads naturally to How can one have natural trees on Mars? I loved all of it.

 

Tony :smile:

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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