Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted April 6, 2012 Share Posted April 6, 2012 the editted version is on top. ****************************************** That One Dance One night I saw you angel of hope on the dance floor all by yourself. You gave me a chance which is more then all I could of ever perceived from you. You turned my heart upside down and inside out as sparks flew in the hall. Twirling around my heart skips a beat or two as I hear your wings fluttering all around me. If I wear pride on my sleeve the best you can do is fall in love with romance. Don't you see this act of love sacrifice I give you from the bottom of my heart. Sunshine on the water it seems so clear next time around I will give a wedding ring. Our magic captured in a photograph taken. *************************************** Every Dance We Share On a lonely night I found you alone on the back of the dance floor standing all by yourself. We shared a dance I pray lives on in the souls of our hearts for we caused smoke to rise on the dance hall ballroom touching our lives. The moves we shared together that day were the best of times for both of us. Everytime my heart skips a beat or two I hear your wings flutter all around. A million words lived in one minute in time. The essence captured in a single photograph taken that night. You are the someone special who turns my life upside down and inside out I promise next time I will bring you that wedding ring. It sounds so crazy for sure the best you can do is fall in love. Once in your life all you want to do is hold me tight and never let go. If you wear your pride on my sleeve the best you can do is fall in love so I ask that you never say goodbye. I promise next time I will bring you flowers hoping you say I do in poetry. Sunshine on the water it seems so clear don't you see this act of love sacrifice I give you from the bottom of my heart. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted April 7, 2012 Share Posted April 7, 2012 The edited version I can imagine as a song. Perhaps you could post an audio link here since you have a great reading voice. badge :0) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted April 9, 2012 Share Posted April 9, 2012 Agree with Badge the sentiment would go well with music. "Sunshine on the water" reminds me of John Denver. Benjamin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 I like how you pared it down, Victor. Next time around I will give a wedding ring is striking. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted April 13, 2012 Author Share Posted April 13, 2012 owe it to dedalus or i would have left this one in the dust LOL.... i like the short version better myself. thanks for comment tony, victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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