Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 See is seven feet tall and harder to reach then a six foot burial tomb. I want my baby to be born from your womb. Don’t you know out of the ashes sparks wore born. So why did it end with a pitch fork between us? I want to soar to the clouds above and give you call on the telephone. Can’t you see the horizons I want to fly to with you. Take my hand to the promise land. I vow to you it will be magical. Just give me that chance is all I ask and your everyday will be our heaven. I believe you are my angel sent from the great unknown above. All you have to do is trust. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 3, 2012 Share Posted May 3, 2012 Trust... the hardest thing - to trust. Your poem, sounds very nice, Victor. The sincere feelings and the free spirit of love... Good poem, my friend. Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 4, 2012 Share Posted May 4, 2012 This one's good, Victor. I'm not sure "Trust" is the right title for it, but in some way it is. These are the parts I really like: See is seven feet tall and harder to reach then a six foot burial tomb. I want my baby to be born from your womb ... So why did it end with a pitch fork between us? I want to soar to the clouds above and give you call on the telephone ... Nice work! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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