Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 22, 2012 Share Posted July 22, 2012 When Stars Fall From the Sky How many times I wanted to hold you in my arms. When I cried myself to sleep it was you I was yearning for all-along in both our dreams. If I could turn back the hands-of-time I would make myself a better me only for you my darling that I am in love with romantically. You see I would serenade you with the ultimate love song written to you ideally from my purest thoughts. If you would just let me kiss you on your lips you would only experience the tenderness of the moment that resides in me coming from the bottom of my yearning heart. All you need to know is that I care for you from the beating of my heart pittering away. You see the stars falling from the sky are my teardrops reaching out for you because I am in love with you like no other. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted July 22, 2012 Share Posted July 22, 2012 Reads like a persuasive love-letter-- I hope the object of your desire receives and favourably appreciates the sentiments expressed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 I second what Benjamin says: may your missives lodge in the intended heart, Victor. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted August 10, 2012 Share Posted August 10, 2012 Has a touch of Neruda, Victor, especially here: You see I would serenade you with the ultimate love song written to you ideally from my purest thoughts ... because I am in love with you like no other. Check out his "Tonight I Can Write ... " At least that's what came immediately to my mind. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted August 15, 2012 Author Share Posted August 15, 2012 tony that is too uncanny and funny. it sounds like i know his love interest. of coure ive read some of his poems, but not in-depthly. i guess i will be reading more of his works. hmmm... lol... victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.
Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible.