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When Stars Fall From the Sky


Larsen M. Callirhoe
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Larsen M. Callirhoe

When Stars Fall From the Sky

 

 

How many times I wanted to

hold you in my arms.

 

When I cried myself to sleep

it was you I was yearning for

all-along in both our dreams.

 

If I could turn back

the hands-of-time

I would make myself

a better me only for you

my darling that I am

in love with romantically.

 

You see I would serenade you

with the ultimate love song

written to you ideally

from my purest thoughts.

 

If you would just let me

kiss you on your lips

you would only experience

the tenderness of the moment

that resides in me

coming from the bottom

of my yearning heart.

 

All you need to know is that I care for you

from the beating of my heart pittering away.

You see the stars falling from the sky

are my teardrops reaching out for you

because I am in love with you like no other.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Reads like a persuasive love-letter-- I hope the object of your desire receives and favourably appreciates the sentiments expressed. :smile:

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David W. Parsley

I second what Benjamin says: may your missives lodge in the intended heart, Victor.

 

- Dave

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  • 3 weeks later...

Has a touch of Neruda, Victor, especially here:

 

You see I would serenade you

with the ultimate love song

written to you ideally

from my purest thoughts

 

... because I am in love with you like no other.

 

Check out his "Tonight I Can Write ... " At least that's what came immediately to my mind.

 

Tony :smile:

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

tony that is too uncanny and funny. it sounds like i know his love interest. of coure ive read some of his poems, but not in-depthly. i guess i will be reading more of his works. hmmm...

 

lol...

 

victor

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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