Benjamin Posted September 3, 2012 Share Posted September 3, 2012 A circus came to town today with caravans and raggy clowns and hissing steam to flute the sounds of its Calliope. Parades of preening troupers bowed: performing seals and dancing bears like courtesans displayed their wares into the autumn evening's shroud. Infernal posted bills portrayed a strong man and performing fleas, with elephants, and chimpanzees who’d steal your very breath away. While phantoms on the high trapeze, defied all odds and plied their trade above the audience, who made a silent enigmatic frieze. The ringmaster a lone Lord God and master of their lurid days, exacted he be given praise by cracking whip and probing rod. Unwary mortals, beguiled by his demon midgets juggling balls, were herded to the waiting stalls where wily barkers caught their eye. And sorely tempted, mesmerised, they gambled in demonic games, with numbered tickets for their names and smiles that matched their greedy eyes. Till fire-eater's flames shot through a grill of freaks and gurning trolls, who integrated with fresh souls and sauces on the barbecue. A circus came to town today with caravans and raggy clowns, and hissing steam to flute the sounds of its Calliope. And with the dying of the year you felt that you could run away to where there is no night or day under it’s aegis--- disappear. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted September 3, 2012 Share Posted September 3, 2012 An interesting title for this entertaining poem, Benjamin. I suppose its publication in this venue is possible thanks to millions of electronic "bytes." The "reality" part of the title is juxtaposed nicely with the atmosphere and spectacles described in the body of the poem. Yes, I think the title is perfect. Carnival, entertainment, reality aside -- it's a long, holiday weekend here. Thank you for the diversion, for providing the amusement. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted September 7, 2012 Share Posted September 7, 2012 Wow. So the theme for you lately is: Transport. You have twice now, lifted me from my chair, before this dimly lit screen somewhere in mid NY and transported me into the beautiful and grotesque world of your imaging- Well played Ben, well played... Juris & Dr. Con Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted September 7, 2012 Author Share Posted September 7, 2012 Tony. The holiday season here usually means at some stage The Seven Faces Of Dr. Lao will appear. I just thought I'd get in first for once. Juris & DC. Well they do say variety is the spice of life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted September 9, 2012 Share Posted September 9, 2012 Benjamin, this work takes me to another time, when masters with names like Edwin Arlington Robinson and Thomas Hardy were writing. The rhymes are new and expertly deployed. And the sometime bright, sometimes garish images take on immediacy that transports the reader into the witnessing "frieze." But the sly composer wants more, crafting symbol and language from the recesses of the psyche to evoke fear of the ultimate Authority figure and his Adversary, the flashing panoply of the actors in their show - us, in so many of our manifestations. Moves seamlessly and seemlessly between the eerie, the bizarre, and the festive. Inspired. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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