goldenlangur Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 What if? Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
Aleksandra Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 What if? Ah yes. I love this poem it reminds me of other similar poem by one poet from here. It was called grandchildand was in 2 loooong parts and it was going like this: part 1 Grandchild ... and the another version I mean part of that long poem: Grandchild Grandchild is love on square And I have talked on this subject about word - poems . And for me makes deep sense. Like the silence. And those kinds of poems so far are most deep and gives most space for thoughts by the readers. Ah GL How you remembered to write this? Is this the fastest written poem by you? Or the slowest? ( it could be ) PS. The poem what I shared is published in a book Thanks for sharing Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 hi goldenlangur, you brought up a very good point and question in your short poem. if you have ever heard of comic books there used to be a series called "what if" by marvel comics in the us. it poised characters in storylikes of the unimaginable possiblities of what if this had happen to this character instead of that happening to the character. thanks for making me ponder. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
pawn shop Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 what is this....very interesting........ a newly discovered but very ancient form of haiku that comes hidden from Egypt hylogliphics.... amazing Quote
JoelJosol Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 experimental. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach
tilsover Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Does that ever present the possibilities! --Tilsover Quote
Tinker Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Hi gl, This certainly trumps "why?" ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
goldenlangur Posted May 15, 2009 Author Posted May 15, 2009 Thank you very much dear PMOers for giving this a shot. Went to edit it, lost connection, lost post and gave up. One learns not to fight forces mightier than oneself But I'm so glad Aleksandra that this misadventure with connection brought you a smile and thank you for sharing your experience goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
goldenlangur Posted May 15, 2009 Author Posted May 15, 2009 Good to see you around pawnshop goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
tonyv Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Wow, Golden! When I first spotted this, I was alarmed. What could it mean??? But then, Aleksandra handled the poem in such a professional manner, what more could I say? I learned here, and I love it! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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