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What if?

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Aleksandra

What if?

 

Ah yes. icon_biggrin.png I love this poem icon_biggrin.png

 

it reminds me of other similar poem by one poet from here. It was called grandchildand was in 2 loooong parts icon_biggrin.png and it was going like this:

part 1

 

Grandchild

 

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and the another version I mean part of that long poem:

Grandchild

 

Grandchild is love on square

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And I have talked on this subject about word - poems . And for me makes deep sense. Like the silence. And those kinds of poems so far are most deep and gives most space for thoughts by the readers.

 

Ah GL icon_biggrin.png How you remembered to write this? Is this the fastest written poem by you? Or the slowest? ( it could be icon_question.gif )

 

PS. The poem what I shared is published in a book icon_biggrin.png

 

Thanks for sharing icon_wink.gif

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

hi goldenlangur,

 

you brought up a very good point and question in your short poem. if you have ever heard of comic books there used to be a series called "what if" by marvel comics in the us. it poised characters in storylikes of the unimaginable possiblities of what if this had happen to this character instead of that happening to the character. thanks for making me ponder.

 

victor

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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what is this....very interesting........

a newly discovered

but very ancient form of haiku

that comes hidden from Egypt hylogliphics....

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"Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach

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Does that ever present the possibilities! --Tilsover

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goldenlangur

Thank you very much dear PMOers for giving this a shot.

 

Went to edit it, lost connection, lost post and gave up. One learns not to fight forces mightier than oneself icon_wink.gif

 

But I'm so glad Aleksandra that this misadventure with connection brought you a smile and thank you for sharing your experience icon_biggrin.png

 

 

goldenlangur

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur

Good to see you around pawnshop

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Wow, Golden! When I first spotted this, I was alarmed. What could it mean??? But then, Aleksandra handled the poem in such a professional manner, what more could I say? I learned here, and I love it!

 

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