Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Poem: *D*E*S*T*I*N*Y* Speaks To Us All! **** Hello all! I’m every ones *D*E*S*T*I*N*Y! DESTINY I AM! I’m your DESTINY … I speak to all! That would hear my lovely voice. The reason & sweat melody that it truly is & always will be. I DESTINY Am every soul’s friend! To roam the sky in passion forevermore where every cloud is like the snow flake that falls from the wind. It melts on the soil only causing flowers of glory to rise anew. I’m a pillar of truth like a clear crystal glass filled with sparkling water & deep red wine. To quench all that thirst for me. I’m your DESTINY after all! DESTINY is my name. I call out the numbers to every persons desire like every green blade of grass that grows in the distant meadows where deers & lions roam. I‘m the journey of pleasing fantasies to reach out for like every treasured jewel that makes your life full. I walk on every illusion you could ever imagine seeking out like every mountain top you climb seeking only fresh air and a pleasant gulf breeze. You’re the wish of every new stars birth like magic you were born blessed to exist always and soar in the horizons forever-more. DESTINY will always capture every morning breath that calls me (or us) out daily. Hello all my name is of course your DESTINY! It is my time to fly amongst the ravens & the doves. and soar were innocence of my heart will always dwell in blissful peace! I bring you infinite drifting clouds to find new horizons in all paths and touch the highest peaks of your utmost thoughts. Where only freedom may dare to go to inspire all the daydreams that fill your most beautiful heart, *D*E*S*T*I*N*Y*! You’re a child of truth to always be from the Creator’s designs & hands of course; the way you perceive. Destiny I hear your desiring reason calling out to me. Only wanting to hold my hand becoming your friend. As you guide life thru out infinity where all the planets know there infinite destinations of enduring survival. Your heart is beautiful like a sparkling gem that shines like the sun. and is as deep and warm as the currents of a never-ending eternal stream by the Atlantic Ocean. DESTINY is my eternal name! I’m every mans’ dreams I’m every woman’s plea I’m every child’s glory I’m everyone’s pillar of hope and grace I will always be the tasteful flavor to all. And every *D*E*S*T*I*N*Y* Be always will I. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
JoelJosol Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Your poem and its first person voice reminds me of the Bible Book of Proverbs and the tone of its delivery. Nice one. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach
tilsover Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 I DESTINY Am every soul’s friend! and every soul's voice. Much enjoyed, thanks Larsen. --Til Quote
Tinker Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Victor, This is fascinating. The same theme over and over with new looks. I don't know if destiny is always friendly or desireable. You certainly tackled a mammoth theme and conquered it. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
goldenlangur Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Hi Victor, What is wonderful about this poem is the note of hope you convey throughout. One gets a sense of a benign force in the "DESTINY" here. I love these parts: "I DESTINY Am every soul’s friend! To roam the sky in passion forevermore.." And: "I bring you infinite drifting clouds to find new horizons in all paths and touch the highest peaks of your utmost thoughts." Also: "I’m every mans’ dreams I’m every woman’s plea I’m every child’s glory I’m everyone’s pillar of hope and grace" You've been thinking deeply it appears. Thank you for this upbeat write. goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
Frank E Gibbard Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 A personal tour de force Larse. You took on passionately such a wide subject,well done. Frank Quote
Aleksandra Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Victor what a beautiful poem you wrote. This is something new what I have read by you. This long poem flows wonderful with it's expressions, and thats why provokes the reader to go on and on to the end of the poem. I love this poem of you Vic. Especially like those parts: I’m a pillar of truth like a clear crystal glass filled with sparkling water & deep red wine. To quench all that thirst for me. I walk on every illusion you could ever imagine seeking out like every mountain top you climb seeking only fresh air and a pleasant gulf breeze. It is my time to fly amongst the ravens & the doves. and soar were innocence of my heart will always dwell in blissful peace! I bring you infinite drifting clouds to find new horizons in all paths and touch the highest peaks of your utmost thoughts. Wonderful written Victor, very moving and deep. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia
tonyv Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Victor, I like how you use the asterisks; they add a feeling of glitter and temptation. The poem starts off like a chant: Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote: Hello all! I’m every ones *D*E*S*T*I*N*Y! DESTINY I AM! I’m your DESTINY … I speak to all! That would hear my lovely voice. The reason & sweat melody that it truly is & always will be. I DESTINY Am every soul’s friend! To roam the sky in passion forevermore where every cloud is like the snow flake that falls from the wind. It melts on the soil only causing flowers of glory to rise anew. I’m a pillar of truth like a clear crystal glass filled with sparkling water & deep red wine. To quench all that thirst for me. I’m your DESTINY after all! DESTINY is my name. I call out the numbers to every persons desire like every green blade of grass that grows in the distant meadows where deers & lions roam. Poco a poco (little by little) and dolce (sweetly), the staccato bark of carnies on the midway eventually slips into mesmerizing lyrics with the occasional jolt (in bold): Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote: I‘m the journey of pleasing fantasies to reach out for like every treasured jewel that makes your life full. I walk on every illusion you could ever imagine seeking out like every mountain top you climb seeking only fresh air and a pleasant gulf breeze. You’re the wish of every new stars birth like magic you were born blessed to exist always and soar in the horizons forever-more. DESTINY will always capture every morning breath that calls me (or us) out daily. Hello all my name is of course your DESTINY! It is my time to fly amongst the ravens & the doves. and soar were innocence of my heart will always dwell in blissful peace! I bring you infinite drifting clouds to find new horizons in all paths and touch the highest peaks of your utmost thoughts. Where only freedom may dare to go to inspire all the daydreams that fill your most beautiful heart, *D*E*S*T*I*N*Y*! You’re a child of truth to always be from the Creator’s designs & hands of course; the way you perceive. Destiny I hear your desiring reason calling out to me. Only wanting to hold my hand becoming your friend. As you guide life thru out infinity where all the planets know there infinite destinations of enduring survival. Your heart is beautiful like a sparkling gem that shines like the sun. and is as deep and warm as the currents of a never-ending eternal stream by the Atlantic Ocean . The poem subito (suddenly) returns to the tempo primo (original tempo): marcato (or marching beat): Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote: DESTINY is my eternal name! I’m every mans’ dreams I’m every woman’s plea I’m every child’s glory I’m everyone’s pillar of hope and grace I will always be the tasteful flavor to all. And every *D*E*S*T*I*N*Y* Be always will I. Sorry for the Italian MUSICAL TERMS ... I'm just trying to sound fancy . But I do mean what I say about this poem's musicality. I love it! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 15, 2009 Author Posted May 15, 2009 thanks everyone for the wonderful comments on this on and tony i understand musical terms i use to sing and dance in chorus class. it was called swing. that is when you sing and dance at the same time but of course you may have already known that then again maybe you learned something new. i will respond to everyone's comments personally on this one tomorrow. victor aka larsen Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
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