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I watched you dismantle a clock

looking for God's heartbeat

in the cogs and springs.

 

Some nights you would sleep on the streets,

stitching and unstitching stars

searching for the index of creation.

 

I waited and observed a spider

finishing a web, netting the moon.

He swayed in the rigging, satisfied

Larsen M. Callirhoe
Posted

outstanding write Barry. i like you meticulousness in this write. loved all of this to tell you the truth.

 

victor

Larsen M. Callirhoe

David W. Parsley
Posted

Agree with Victor, very nice. I guess I identify all too well with the three main (earthly) characters in this piece.

 

- Dave

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