eclipse Posted October 6, 2012 Share Posted October 6, 2012 I watched you dismantle a clock looking for God's heartbeat in the cogs and springs. Some nights you would sleep on the streets, stitching and unstitching stars searching for the index of creation. I waited and observed a spider finishing a web, netting the moon. He swayed in the rigging, satisfied Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted October 6, 2012 Share Posted October 6, 2012 outstanding write Barry. i like you meticulousness in this write. loved all of this to tell you the truth. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted October 13, 2012 Share Posted October 13, 2012 Agree with Victor, very nice. I guess I identify all too well with the three main (earthly) characters in this piece. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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