eclipse Posted November 5, 2012 Posted November 5, 2012 I must be the last, the dead pretending to be alive have passed a candle like a baton and wait for my demise beneath bullet shredded skies. I play a piano and rhapsodize the music helps to keep me alive, the ghosts dance a ballet each holds a bullet with my name. One last ghost stands on a provisional grave, the candle is now a gun with each click one of my senses is gone. I join the ghosts and dance. Quote
Benjamin Posted November 6, 2012 Posted November 6, 2012 I like this. It's imaginitive, modern and relevent. A novel slant perhaps on the traditional Danse Macabre. B. Quote
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