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Larsen M. Callirhoe
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wedding bells ring true

it is time to get married

all i do is melt

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Aleksandra
wedding bells ring true

it is time to get married

all i do is melt

 

This one sounds sad. Interesting poem Vic. It is disappointing piece like without hope, watching from aside.

 

Thank you for sharing Vic

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

aleks you made me chuckle. i was happy to get married in this one. what i meant by the last line was i was excited to get married but very nervous. the person i married made me anxious and nervous lol so i melted like ice.

 

cheers my friend. i think you misunderstood this one lol.

 

victor

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icon_biggrin.png ah probably icon_redface.gif but you know what? Maybe I am still right icon_biggrin.png because anyway you melted and that is sad, disappointing , and now you watch from aside , right? icon_rolleyes.gificon_pirat.pngicon_biggrin.png

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Hi Victor,

 

A moment of special significance captured with love.

 

 

 

Isn't it great that short as a haiku is, it still delivers with effect! icon_smile.gif

 

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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