fdelano Posted November 23, 2012 Share Posted November 23, 2012 The Good Wife (Title change) Cold air followed the drunken man into the kitchen of the aging cottage. Warm aromas filled the room as the stew simmered, awaiting the man’s arrival. The wife hurried with her husband’s bowl, ladling the meaty treat, crusty bread ready. He caught her arm and jolted her left eye with the back of his hand. “Been loafing all day, hey?” Tears ran as she continued to fix his place at the table, half her face already turning purple with pain. Fumbling, she burned her hand as she tried to fill the bowl, some liquid spilling to the floor. She turned quickly at the footsteps. A whack to her right temple caused her to drop the bowl, which splintered in the center of the scattered food. She calmly filled her own bowl and set it at her husband’s place, pulling out his chair. Laughing loudly, he said, “There. Now your face is balanced. Aren’t you gonna cry and run off to bed?” “No, I’ll just sit here while you eat. Here’s some more beer to wash it down with. I’ll wait. “Wait for what, another bash? “No, dear; you have to sleep sometime.” Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted November 23, 2012 Share Posted November 23, 2012 A brutal poem that portrays the chilling violence. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted November 24, 2012 Share Posted November 24, 2012 Graphic stuff and as they say, what goes round comes around. You shouldn't mess with those who cook your food The last two lines conjured images of Cathy Bates in that Stephen King film Misery. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted November 24, 2012 Author Share Posted November 24, 2012 When I jokingly told my wife I would give her a good whack, she looked me in the eye and said those last words. She was serious and holding a pair of scissors at the time. Chilling is very descriptive. Think Lorena Bobbitt. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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