Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 My Last Words Peach tree in the background Flowers growing in the yard The wind is blowing on my face and still my tears are falling on the asphalt. I whisper words of love in your ears but you threw it all away like a sword cutting off my hands and still I love you so much. My inept heart sings to you where the butterflies flutter and birds fly in the air. You made my heart bleed with the dagger in your hand that pierced me so and my dying words fade in the dark. I will love you till the end of time. (echoing in the cold winter air!) Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 Unusually dense with startling, perceptive imagery and turn of phrase, Victor. A poetic treat transmuted from authentic pain. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted November 26, 2012 Share Posted November 26, 2012 Peach tree in the backgroundFlowers growing in the yard The wind is blowing on my face and still my tears are falling on the asphalt. I think this a poem in itself. Marvellous lines. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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