Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted December 2, 2012 Share Posted December 2, 2012 Poem, Sweet Dreams Slowly sipping wine thinking about you and the cold wind is blowing on my face. Touching you with my soul as a river of words flows from my heart allowing my blood stream to unite with yours. Dreaming of you is the only thing that makes my breath soar to the tallest mountain and the highest cloud roaming in the free sky. The sun is shining on you, but it really my love that is keeping you warm. I sing you my song the tune that it is telling you I am in love with you. Yes it is nice to have sweet dreams like these. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted December 3, 2012 Share Posted December 3, 2012 Slowly sipping winethinking about you and the cold wind These lines are tight and effective Victor. The lines are effective because they are tight. In fact they are beautiful lines and convey so much emotion in their tightness. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dansalinger Posted December 18, 2012 Share Posted December 18, 2012 very nice. it reminded me of a simon and garfunkel song: For Emily, Wherever I May Find Her Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted January 13, 2013 Share Posted January 13, 2013 Lovely, Victor. I very much agree with what Badger said. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.
Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible.