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Sweet Dreams

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

Poem, Sweet Dreams


Slowly sipping wine

thinking about you

and the cold wind

is blowing on my face.


Touching you with my soul

as a river of words

flows from my heart

allowing my blood stream

to unite with yours.


Dreaming of you

is the only thing

that makes my breath soar

to the tallest mountain

and the highest cloud

roaming in the free sky.


The sun is shining on you,

but it really my love

that is keeping you warm.


I sing you my song

the tune that it is

telling you I am in love

with you.


Yes it is nice

to have sweet dreams

like these.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Slowly sipping wine

thinking about you

and the cold wind


These lines are tight and effective Victor. The lines are effective because they are tight. In fact they are beautiful lines and convey so much emotion in their tightness.



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