Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted December 4, 2012 Share Posted December 4, 2012 Pictures of You this melody is playing in the back of my mind my heart is yearning for you and my hair is turning grey i have bills to pay and i have been drinking my money away tell me the tears falling from my face are not real though you have lied to me more than one time before the picture of us is fading on the wall as the dust collects around the rim maybe i should have left you but you rocked my world than you turned it upside down why did you have to go my blood has spilled on the ground from my bleeding heart i had a friend pull the dagger out of me yesterday is just a passing dream but i will always love you just the same Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dedalus Posted December 4, 2012 Share Posted December 4, 2012 OK, you are sad, but what does it mean? There are 7 Billion people in the world (as of last year), and roughly half of them are female. So if one girl doesn't work out I think it's pretty goddam obvious you try for one -- or maybe even several -- others. Sooner or later you are bound to click. Move out and move on .... Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted December 4, 2012 Author Share Posted December 4, 2012 hey brendan i just like writing crap like this. yes i have moved on. once you f--k someones brains out it is hard to forget lol... and i know there are several beautiful smart ladies out there that will want me in the future. call it foresight. it is her loss not mine. the hard part is we grew up together. the memories you share are hard to forget. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted December 5, 2012 Share Posted December 5, 2012 "as the dust collects around the rim" Brilliantly sad, or sadly brilliant: I dunno. I just know I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted December 5, 2012 Share Posted December 5, 2012 Lash, I seldom comment on your work, which I find somewhat maudlin, forgetting the stupid shit I write. I like this one; I think you put a lot of work into it, or else it just tripped off your tongue--well, fingers in this case. Bren spoke truly; there are billions floating around. One will find you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted December 5, 2012 Share Posted December 5, 2012 the picture is fading on the wall as the dust collects around the rim I think the 'us' can be assumed. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted January 14, 2013 Share Posted January 14, 2013 I like your lyrical, nostalgic melancholia, Victor. My favorite parts: ... i have bills to pay and i have been drinking my money away ... tell me the tears falling from my face are not real though you have lied to me more than one time before the picture of us is fading on the wall as the dust collects around the rim ... And yes, it's her loss. As others have already said, on to the next one(s)! And always remember: fifty percent of a woman's charm is illusion. At least! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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