Benjamin Posted December 5, 2012 Share Posted December 5, 2012 Faces-- bunched pendulous pocked gargoyles grinning gremlins goblins withered witches circling sinking staring prying probing-- . Voices-- whispering seething maggot-like sarcastic mingling lisping belching rasping rankling piercing grumbling silence filching oddly shouting sleep disturbing thought obliterating all consuming cackling screaming voices-- . Hands-- emerging-- fingers pointing jabbing scratching groping grasping tearing .rapine hands--- . belonging to the faces who demand a soul. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted December 6, 2012 Author Share Posted December 6, 2012 Spontaneity-- following a brief conversation I had in 2008 with a small businessman I'd met by chance in a hotel bar. He was struggling for solvency. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted December 6, 2012 Share Posted December 6, 2012 This is different Benjamin- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted December 6, 2012 Author Share Posted December 6, 2012 I recall a brilliant performance by Billie Whitelaw in Samuel Beckit's “Not I” described as one of the most disturbing images in theatre: a disembodied mouth, telling its tale “at the speed of thought.” Amazing what sticks in the mind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted December 7, 2012 Share Posted December 7, 2012 this form was pulled off well. powerful barrage of words ben. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted December 7, 2012 Share Posted December 7, 2012 Seemed a rant from someone ready to go off. Good person to keep some distance from--like maybe a different bar. Made me think of myself, at times. I like experimental work. Thanks. Paco Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted December 8, 2012 Author Share Posted December 8, 2012 An experimental observation of frustration--- bounced around by intangible forces. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted January 13, 2013 Share Posted January 13, 2013 Reminiscent of your "gurning" poem. Thanks for the background, too. It makes it real. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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