Jump to content
Poetry Magnum Opus

I Remember Winter


dr_con
 Share

Recommended Posts

I Remember Winter

 

Snow muffles

embraces covers

shifts the world

hides meaning

makes everything

familiar reminds us

 

the difference between small love and big love

one reflects what we want to believe

the other shows us the truth

 

Mirrors just reflections

requiring two and imply

three proving the one

 

Understanding has nothing to do

with culture but it does ask why

you chose points for the icicles

hanging on coniferous shrub

by undecorated wall in our

shared memory of winter

 

Even in the hot tangle

of limb on limb jungles

this humid luminosity

our deep remembering.

thegateless.org Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-) Or if your bored, head to the Zazzle store: https://www.zazzle.com/store/gateless. If you buy anything I lose a bet, so consider that before you violate the digital rules.

 

Gate(less.png

Link to comment
Share on other sites

That next to last stanza is almost mystical.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Undulates like a light silk sheet raised high and gently lowered on air over a waiting bed where it falls evenly into place. Particularly liked the 2nd stanza. B.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Thanks to both of you- I replaced with an edited version. Time to catch up...;-)

thegateless.org Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-) Or if your bored, head to the Zazzle store: https://www.zazzle.com/store/gateless. If you buy anything I lose a bet, so consider that before you violate the digital rules.

 

Gate(less.png

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • 2 weeks later...

A melancholic look back, Juris? If we're lucky -- or are we? -- we come full circle to mature understanding, to that bittersweet realization that there even is such a thing as a big love. Perhaps ignorance is bliss ... Perfect title, too!

 

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • 3 months later...

Thanks Tony! Sorry I missed this originally, i like your take and yes indeed, yes indeed;-)

 

 

Juris

thegateless.org Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-) Or if your bored, head to the Zazzle store: https://www.zazzle.com/store/gateless. If you buy anything I lose a bet, so consider that before you violate the digital rules.

 

Gate(less.png

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.
Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

 Share

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

By using this site, you agree to our Guidelines.