dr_con Posted January 2, 2013 Share Posted January 2, 2013 I Remember Winter Snow muffles embraces covers shifts the world hides meaning makes everything familiar reminds us the difference between small love and big love one reflects what we want to believe the other shows us the truth Mirrors just reflections requiring two and imply three proving the one Understanding has nothing to do with culture but it does ask why you chose points for the icicles hanging on coniferous shrub by undecorated wall in our shared memory of winter Even in the hot tangle of limb on limb jungles this humid luminosity our deep remembering. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 That next to last stanza is almost mystical. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 Undulates like a light silk sheet raised high and gently lowered on air over a waiting bed where it falls evenly into place. Particularly liked the 2nd stanza. B. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted January 3, 2013 Author Share Posted January 3, 2013 Thanks to both of you- I replaced with an edited version. Time to catch up...;-) Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted January 13, 2013 Share Posted January 13, 2013 A melancholic look back, Juris? If we're lucky -- or are we? -- we come full circle to mature understanding, to that bittersweet realization that there even is such a thing as a big love. Perhaps ignorance is bliss ... Perfect title, too! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted May 13, 2013 Author Share Posted May 13, 2013 Thanks Tony! Sorry I missed this originally, i like your take and yes indeed, yes indeed;-) Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted May 13, 2013 Share Posted May 13, 2013 disconnected and connected, individual and tribal liked the shared memory,our deep remembering badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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