eclipse Posted January 6, 2013 Posted January 6, 2013 Martin Luther and his wings dream apart they shroud his ears to filter the echo of chains. Dreams merge, King warms Lincoln's feet as he lay at rest. Martin wears Abe's shoes-JFK campaigns, King eyes an assassin. Kennedy falls with two towers. Liberated wings wait for a woken Luther to rise-ranking the calls as they plummet. Waiting for a saviour to out soar the fires below- both famous and obscure prophets blow against opposing sides of the flames, King landing without bias breathes onto the blaze, he creates the piercings ready for the loaning of celestial flight. Angel Martin's time on earth is finite. Quote
Benjamin Posted January 8, 2013 Posted January 8, 2013 Interesting mixture of biblical imagery and political history. Quote
Frank E Gibbard Posted January 16, 2013 Posted January 16, 2013 Very solid mixing with ancient and modern, liked a lot this take on historical characters eclipse. Quote
David W. Parsley Posted January 19, 2013 Posted January 19, 2013 Just got back in the swing, Barry (almost, still have some deadlines to work this weekend, then should see some clear space again). Exciting theme and use of form. This is one of those that I want to take some time with. For example, I am trying to make up my mind about the title, its use of ambiguity relative to the great man's equally great namesake. Other things, too. Regardless, it is a striking, timely, and original work. Thank You, - Dave Quote
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