Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 i was born free i was born free to roam the world i found my lover in my dreams she was so beautiful to my heart i sang to her a love song why is it so hard to not always be by your side we dance together drinking whiskey and wine i hope these times never end i cherish every moment i have with you we dance to the love song i wrote for you i touch your cheek on your face as the tears roll down your face you tell me you are not ready to love oh how you broke my heart telling me you want to live in the world all i wanna do is hold you tight and dance with you in my arms please baby give me a chance and a reason to believe in us god told me we belong together i hope you have faith to believe you see i was born to be free and roam the world evermore with you so please take my hand and i will show you your dreams and the world. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 Stunning! While reading, I feel like I am watching a movie of love and deceive. I always question myself why god is so miser to make our dreams come true with the one we love most! I don’t know simply like you. Thanks for your excellent expression. by the way, is there any system to make a particular post as favorite? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billydo Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 I tried reading this allowed and it seemed song like. Very nice indeed. Cheers Mike Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 Victor my friend. As always much enjoyed in your poem. Always in your poetry is present that nostalgic, that lovely poetical voice, romantic, as there is nothing what can hurt you. That is for respect, bc you know when you love - you love and that is for sure. You express all the time in your poems, All your angriness and pain you are transforming in love, in forgiveness, in good feelings. And the title was wonderful and wise, deep also. I love it. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 Bloodyday wrote: by the way, is there any system to make a particular post as favorite? Bloodyday, as I understood you, we don't have that option in this system. We will check, for any case, but I don't think so. And yes that would be nice. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 15, 2009 Author Share Posted May 15, 2009 thanks everyone for the wonderful feedback and comments to my poem. victor aka larsen Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 Hi Victor, I don't know how I missed this beautiful poem! One gets a sense of the narrator's intense passion and belief and how these empower his world and his imagination. I love these lines: Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote: you see i was born to be free and roam the world evermore with you so please take my hand and i will show you your dreams and the world. Passion and belief could well free one from all shadows of pain and suffering. Wonderful to see you write! goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 The narrator's devotion is manifest. He expresses it with meaningful acts -- we dance to the love song i wrote for you . -- specifically, love songs and verse. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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