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The Shore


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The Shore

 

On a long walk just inside the tide’s reach, on salt-damp sand that gives and

holds prints of toes and heels, with scattered shells constantly resettled by the

ceaseless sea, I soak in the solitude of early morning moods and quiet stirrings,

absorbing as much air and light as I can hold, then trudge the way back along

a higher stretch, to find new thoughts that temper the strain on body parts long

unused, my return almost unbearable but a necessary part of going onward.

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OMG! Are you drunk?

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Oh, forgot to thank you, Tink. Glad this bit meant something.

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David W. Parsley

I'm with Tinker. This poem brings me to the place and circumstance, evokes the narrator's mood. Nothing to suggest, it stands well as is, for me.

 

- Dave

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