eclipse Posted February 5, 2013 Posted February 5, 2013 I left the choir and now sing alone,pray in public, whisper leaves back onto trees. I walk across the Humber bridge instead of driving, below me the ghostly hunters pass,one of them raises a bottle to offer a drink, I drop a bottle of wine with a pinch of blood and the whales-men get drunk, the whale swims into resurrection mistakes me for a mermaid and starts singing. Quote
dcmarti1 Posted February 5, 2013 Posted February 5, 2013 LOVE that first sentence! Militant, but not destructive. Powerful. Other than MAYBE needing a comma between resurrection and mistakes (in my browser, line #3)....pretty perfect. Quote
David W. Parsley Posted March 24, 2013 Posted March 24, 2013 Barry, I really like this poem. Takes me someplace I feel I should recognize, brings the sense of what I must remember about the strangeness of the world and its infiinite variety, its capacity to excite wonder. - Dave Quote
douglas Posted April 6, 2013 Posted April 6, 2013 loved reading this piece - great use of words and images... Quote To receive love, you have to give it...
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