jainrohit Posted February 24, 2013 Share Posted February 24, 2013 So soon it had started ; So soon it has ended Thanks heavens ! life's perilous deceit has ended . Man peeps back in his past ! frowns on his foot prints ; Why repent now ?? life's long lonely street has ended . Life is a possession granted by god ; We surrender our rights , when permit has ended. Vulgar and obscene the lyrics have become ; The era of morals and merit has ended. Shrewd banker is plotting new ways of fraud ; Since the era of cheaper credit has ended. Knowledge will remain clumped behind firewalls ; For us the founder of Reddit has ended. Vietnam - afghan - is Teheran the next ?? its long since the war in Tikrit has ended . As life ! You too betrayed me ! My dear ghazal ; Fulfilling your demands , your ''Rohit'' has ended Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted February 24, 2013 Share Posted February 24, 2013 Without looking at your "tags", I recognized the ghazal right away. This was a perfect choice of form for your thoughts! Love this line: The era of morals and merit has ended. Kudos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted February 24, 2013 Share Posted February 24, 2013 Radical and right-on, Jainrohit! Nice contemporary use of the form. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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