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Waste Of Space


Frank E Gibbard
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Frank E Gibbard

Nearly everyday

don't anti-social

jerks you know

have that way

to get up your

nose? I've my

own technique

of coping. I zap

them with my

super laser ray

and turn them

into neat piles

of molten clay

labelled: "was

a waste of DNA."

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short crisp and zapped ! .............. breakup of lines into small verses really did justice to this .......

 

super laser ray

and turn them

into neat piles

of molten clay

 

the enjambment here is at its finest .....

 

with such people i'd have done the same

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